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16 comments:

K.G.Suraj said...

C O N G R A T E S ....

Warm Regards
K.G.Suraj

Anonymous said...

nice work! but you can elaborate on it more!

Pradip Somasundaran said...

Dear Lakshmi,
Am so happy that finally you have a place of your own! Beautifully done! Hope to see more here in the coming days.

K A SHAJI said...

These lines are providing the same feeling of having kanakamunthirimanikal. Evokes a lot of feelings.Expecting more....

Priya said...

great writing........ loves felt at its best!!!!!!

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Anonymous said...

Dhanalakshmi, very very interesting blogg name! are you a dancer also? into full time writing? pleas let us know about you!!
very nice presenttion,less words but effective writing! add more

sujith said...

kanaka mundirikal manikal korkume pulariyail-------
great blog .include more
good feel
keep pouring congrags and all the best

ABDUL SAMAD.MP said...

varikal othiri ishtayi... nalla bhavi ashamsikkunnu......

Sureshkumar Punjhayil said...

Good... Best Wishes Dr.

bosubose said...

gr8
work

mkr_nair said...

dear lekshmi ,
very nice line ,
lots of fellingss...........

sjith said...

kanakamundiri vayikkumbol vallathe feel cheyunnu.....

sajan said...

very nice line ,
lots of fellingss...........

Vas Vasudevan said...

"nanmakal, niravukal, nirangal baakkivachenne njanaakkave..."
nice words, beutifully arranged. Nanma niranja oru snehathinte ormakkayi..
Ma'am, I am a fan.

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